Neko of the Moon

In a world where only Gijinkas rule and for the moment only consist of Nekos. Each race of Nekos holds an interesting and terrifying power. Moon Nekos hold the power of the moon and stars they also sadly can turn into terrifying monsters with only just one spell, Sun Nekos hold the power of the Sun and Fire there are no known records of any terrifying powers as of yet, Earth Nekos hold the power of the Earth and Plants their known powers are becoming terrible giants destroying many in their path, Dark Nekos are Nekos that hold the power of Darkness and Shadows apparently their known terrifying powers are becoming Demons, but no one is sure, Dark Nekos themselves are outcasted by the rest of the Gijinkas race for being terrifying in it's own way, Water Nekos hold the power of Water and Ice, no known records of their terrifying powers, and Nariko Nekos that hold the power of Thunder and Lightning, their known terrifying power is becoming Dragons, but again no one is sure. Each race tries to make sure to hide their terrifying powers, some better than others. Moon Nekos are actually the ruling race over all nekos followed by the Sun Nekos. The Water Nekos control all trade from sea and the Earth Nekos control all trades on land. The Nariko Nekos live in the Mountains watching over the Dark Nekos for any suspicious activities. One night during the Starlight Ball was Princess Lunaria 18th birthday, she is the next ruler of the Moon Nekos. Something terrible has happened someone has uttered the terrifying spell that transforms the Nekos into horrible beasts, in this form they are out of control and very blood lustful so they kill any and all in sight those who didn't transform were halted by a whistling of some kind as if some one was playing a flute Lunaria was one of the people that didn't transform because of the flute sound but she still wasn't safe with almost every Moon Neko transformed and killing many of her people she wasn't sure what to do except close all gates leading out of the city so as to not release the creatures onto other races. By the end of the night they weren't much Moon Nekos left that she knows of in fact she can't even find her sisters, her parents transformed into those beasts and ended up killing each other. Lunaria was so tired running around and fighting the beasts that once were her people that she immediately collapsed in the middle of the city. The next morning she awoke in a Earth Nekos town of Florast, the trading post right outside of Lunars Kingdom. Many has happened in one night and she isn't sure what to do, what will her next plan be? Locate the people who unleashed the beast unto the entire kingdom or rebuild her now dying race? oh what is a princess to do in these now dark times?

Chapter 1

Self Critique:
Yeah so this story is a working progress but I am liking what I have right now. In case no one has noticed yet this is the same moon from the Midnight Alchemist tittle, I was to tired last night to draw up another one so I just used that one got rid of the buildings and added new stars and played around with the style of the tittle and this is what I got. It's not bad but I thing it could be better. I plan on doing Neko designs for each race even halfling designs along with actual characters in my story. I hope you guys enjoy what I have thank you.