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Pokemon-Ira by TorresAdlinCDL91 Pokemon-Ira by TorresAdlinCDL91
Ira was just 12 years old when she set of to become a Pokemon Master. Her very first Pokemon was Eevee, she was eight years old, playing outside when this injured Pokemon came stumbling out of the bush, it was an Eevee, since then she has nursed him and took care of him and became her very first Pokemon. Since then she wanted to become not just a Pokemon Master but a Pokemon Healer as well, learn all she can about medicine and herbology. Now she is fourteen and has captured many Pokemon since she set out at twelve, she has now eight Pokemon, but there are still many more she wish to collect. Ira waited two years before going to a gym battle because she first wanted to collect Pokemon and practice honing not only her skill as a trainer but her Pokemon skill as well. There are so many Pokemon and so many places she hasn't seen yet, she can't wait to start her first Gym Battle at Pewter City.

Pokemon she has obtained:
Eevee
Vaporeon
Jolteon
Flareon
Espeon
Umbreon
Leafeon
Glaceon

Pokemon she wishes to capture:
Vulpix
Ninetails
Ponyta
Rapidash
Onix
Gyarados
Butterfree
Scyther
Growlithe
Arcanine
Persian
Pikachu
Raichu
Pidgey
Pidgeotto
Pidgeot
Venusaur
Charizard
Blastoise

Self Critique:
It has been forever since I had her on this computer. In fact I haven't drawn her since Pokemon(Anime) was released over here in America, I thought she could use a revision. I think her anatomy is a little better then some of my other drawing but still think her arms are a little long. The Pokemon look ok, I think better than what I did before. There isn't much for me to say this time, so go ahead and tell me what you think.
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Luckkky13 Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She is quite lovely, and also "HELL YEAH!" A girl of dark skinned nature.
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TorresAdlinCDL91 Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup, did you see Terra yet?
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LamarintaZaros Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You may want to develop your character a little bit more than that. This will avoid the chances of your character being called a Mary Sue. Also are you focusing on the original forms of Eevee or the new evolutions, reason I ask is Espeon, Umbreon, Leafeon, and Glaceon are not the original three evolutions. If you want to base this on the original 151 pokemon then stick with just Jolteon, Flareon, and Vaporeon.

This is just a suggestion though.
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TorresAdlinCDL91 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the advise/critique, honestly, story wise there wasn't a lot of thought put into it, I haven't drawn this character in years so coming up with something might be awhile, so I just came up with just a little bit. Also about the Pokemon, she has traveled around a bit, she hasn't really stayed in Kanto, she also used those two years traveling to other nurse centers and learning more about other Pokemon, including the other Eevee evolutions so she went to capture them to I guess complete the set. I'm sorry if this sounds like crap it has been awhile since I thought of this character. I would love more opinions from you if you have any.
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LamarintaZaros Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sure thing :), I tried to type in the critique section but my comp is being stupid.

[link]

This is a useful link to go by in developing a character, Ive been using it as a guide for my character as well. For the most part she has passed the test but could use a little more development. I also have a male character she ends up marrying so i may use the garystu test as well.

Could you tell me what region she is from maybe we can start from there.
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TorresAdlinCDL91 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure thing, she is from the Kanto Region, I'm not sure where though, there are a lot of cities and not enough villages at least that I know off, I was thinking about a race but decided to drop it. Other than that I am also thinking about Parents backgrounds too, but still a little shaky.
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